Diving

In room 9 we have been writing a story about Underwater. Here is what mine looks like. Thanks for reading my story.

I saw a moldy haunted mansion	Scary, scared,
I go inside I see a sea snake, skeletons and a shark	creeped out
Used to be made from gold	Sparkly
Find a Treasure map that leads me to a abandoned ship
I find a Treasure chest  full of gold	shiny

One sunny day I wanted to go for a swim. I went very deep into the Ocean. I saw a moldy haunted mansion. I was scared.

I went inside. I saw sea snakes, skeletons and a shark.

I also saw golden bits on the ground. I thought to myself, “Hmm I think that this mansion is made of gold and the gold rusted and then the rust turned into mold.”

I was looking around. I saw a treasure map. It lead me to an abandoned ship.

I found a chest in the corner of the mansion. I am now rich. I got out of the water and went home in my car. I took the chest with me. I showed my mum the chest. With the money we bought a mansion, but our mansion is not under the water.

how to make a great comment

With Miss Morgan in room 9 we were learning how to make a good comment. We also made a poster.
                                         Here is mine. I hope it helps you to make a good comment.

plankton facts

for topic we were learning about plankton. here are some facts and photos

sea mammals

we have been learning about sea mammals 

my sea mammal is a Beluga Whale

here are some facts and photos

thanks for reading.

personal and privet information

Today in Cybersmart we were learning about private and personal information. Privet information is
stuff that you don't share with people. Personal information is stuff that is okay to share with people.

Cooper shared too much information on his blog. Here is what we found out.