I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
With Miss Morgan in room 9 we were learning how to make a good comment. We also made a poster.
Here is mine. I hope it helps you to make a good comment.
Hello Azaria.I like the background and the picture you have used.Maybe next time you could put the numbers in sequence,that could be helpful.I have used a couple of your ideas writing my comment to you.What is something positive you could say about my writing?I look forward to hearing from you.
Hello Azaria.I like the background and the picture you have used.Maybe next time you could put the numbers in sequence,that could be helpful.I have used a couple of your ideas writing my comment to you.What is something positive you could say about my writing?I look forward to hearing from you.
ReplyDeleteHi Azaria. I like the background and it is very colourful. And I like colours because its very cheerful.
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